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Your Booking Is Not Complete. You Need an Email Confirmation from Our Reservation System.


-Please Watch The Video Below to Continue-

Please Select a Time To Confirm with Us

One of our team members will call to confirm your reservation in Fare Harbor, deliver your tickets, and assign your pickup location and time.


Please provide your booking details, and let us know the best time to reach you.

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We Have Something Special For You

Because you're now one of our customers, we want to share some special tours with you at a special price that you won't find anywhere else.


Please consider the offers below for our Pearl Harbor Tour & the Best Hawaiian Luau.

USS Arizona Memorial

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GENERAL NOTES:

Almost There Guys! I'm really pleased with the progress. =)


I think we should be able to knock everything out in one more round of revisions. Then, we will have a great format to use for future explainer videos as well.

All of my current comments will be in red text for this round, and everything is covered up here in the top section.

I don't care for the background music. Please use the same track from the promo video to make it easy.

This was missed from the last request. Please change the background music. I'm going to provide a new audio, and put the link to the right.

The background music sound level is a little loud right now... Sometimes I strain to hear Tanisha speak. Please lower it about 10-15% of current level.

We need to work on the format of the supers. Let's move all of the captions to the format on the right. Only, let's put the captions on the top, above Tanisha's head. The bottom (like depicted on the right) will block her hands. And the pop up window method used now is too bulky and blocks much of the video.

Let's make this the format for the entire video... If it will fit on one line above her head, then please display caption there.

If it will not fit on one line above her head... Like the list of things to bring, then use a text box as explained right below.

General Notes on All Supers / Captions:

*Caption Text Is Too Big... Please Lower By 4 px Across the Board

*Please enlarge all TOP SUPERS by 20%

*Please get rid of all asterisks in the TOP SUPERS. (*) It doesn't look good when they appear. But, if it's not a top super, then the asterisk is fine in a list.

*Please go through all TOP SUPERS and make sure that the first letter of each word is capitalized.

*Cancelation Policy Super is misspelled.

*What To Bring & Wear top super has no transparency... Please capitalize the first letter of all words.

Please update the following top supers to match:

  • Fill Out The Form Below (Please Update)
  • Reserve Time With Coordinator (Please Update)
  • Have The Confirmation Call (Please Update)
  • Please Complete The Form Below (Please Update)

Those are all of the notes I have. There are no more new notes below.

*There is too much padding used around the text in the text boxes. For this application, we want text boxes that are only big enough to contain the text with not much extra padding. However, we only need text boxes for what will not display properly above Tanisha's head on one line with no word wrap.

*Please do not use two lines of caption space at the top... Reduce text or text size... Or create text box if needed.

*Use a text box if needed to display a list that will not fit on one line above her head.

*The background of the Text / Caption Boxes seems to be Pure White with 100% Transparency. Let's try 60% transparency so that some of the background image comes through, but still provides enough contrast to see the text.

*Too many changes in format with listing methods like asterisk or 1), 2), 3)... Let's just use the asterisk across the board. I will make these requests in the individual sections below.

I will not comment on the individual sections about the need of the captions to all go up top and everything else that was discussed in this section regarding the supers.

Below, my comments will only deal with other matters related to that particular section.

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[Greeting] 


Alooooha! My name is Tanisha, and I wish you the warmest of greetings on behalf of our team here at the Oahu Circle Island Snorkeling Tour. You've made an excellent choice in reserving our Adventure. We sincerely appreciate your trust in us, and can't wait to host you for the most remarkable experience, Hawaiian style..


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[Purpose of Video]


Folks, the purpose of this video is twofold: it’s to explain how to finish confirming your booking in our reservation system, and also to give you some important information that you'll need to know for the day of the tour.


Now, if you started by purchasing your voucher through an Online Travel Agency like Tripadvisor, please understand that their reservation system is totally separate from our system, and many of the booking details still need to be entered manually on our side to ensure accuracy. 


Also Friends, please know that we have a very easy cancellation policy if your plans should change... However, for your own sake, please don't let anyone else convince you to cancel your booking with us just to save $10 on a "similar" tour.

There are many wanna-be tours out there that try to copy our itinerary... But they cannot copy the experience that we offer. So, thank you for trusting us.


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Please use the background image on the right. Click on the image for large version, then right click to save. Perhaps we should move Tanisha a little to the right to balance the spacing of the supers when they appear on screen.

Also, please add the following textual headings / supers with script timing according to the color coding:


Reveal as she is talking:

1) Complete Your Reservation

2) Review Important Info

Reveal at the top on one line as she is talking... Using Asterisks...Not a list

*Complete Your Reservation

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*Review Import Info

Travel Agency Bookings

Cancelation Policy

Black Text = No Super


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[What is the tour?]


Okay, so let’s talk a little about the excursion. This tour is a guided, full-day, 10 hour adventure that shows you the best that Oahu has to offer...

Including Snorkeling [Jump To Picture of Sea Turtle] and the Dole Pineapple Plantation on the North Shore [Keep Current Video of Dole Plantation].

Now, please understand that we will be either stopping or driving past over 16 noteworthy locations around Oahu. So, it's not possible to spend too much time at each location.

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Also, please understand that some of the locations will be ‘drive by featured.’ For instance, we will drive past Hanauma Bay, see it from a distance, and talk about it on the bus.. However, it's not possible to make this a full stop as it is not allowed legally. So, please understand the difference between full stops and drive bys.

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Please use the background image on the right. Click on the image for large version, then right click to save. Perhaps we should move Tanisha a little to the right to balance the spacing of the supers when they appear on screen.

Also, please add the following textual headings / supers with script timing according to the color coding:


Full Stop Vs. Drive By

CAPTION CAME IN LATE... Should start with the word "Also"

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[What to wear and bring]


Now one important consideration is what to wear and what to bring with you. Well, check the weather before you leave, but comfort is key on the tour. So, Choose resort casual clothes, comfortable footwear, and consider wearing your swimsuit under your clothes for convenience. Most people wear sandals all day with no problems, but there is a lot of moving around because there are so many stops. So wear whatever type of footwear you believe you’ll be comfortable in. 


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Also, we will be providing bottled water, drinks, and snacks, but feel free to pack your own favorite treats.


And don't forget these items either: A small bag, a small umbrella if rain is forecasted, sunscreen & sunglasses, one beach towel per person, your cell phone and charger bank, and cash or cards for lunch, coffee, and the Byodo Temple Entrance Fee.

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Please use the background images on the right. Click on the image for large version, then right click to save. Perhaps we should move Tanisha a little to the right to balance the spacing of the supers when they appear on screen.

Also, please add the following textual headings / supers with script timing according to the color coding:


What To Bring &

What To Wear

To make this fit at the top, please use "What To Bring & Wear"

Reveal as she is speaking:

*Small Bag

*Small Umbrella

*Sunscreen

*Sunglasses

*Beach Towel

*Cell Phone

*Battery Bank

*Cash & Cards

Please use the format as depicted above with asterisks. Also, please make Tanisha half the screen and the list on the other half... Right now the list is taking up 70% of the screen with massive unused padding on the list.

Also please change the background transparency of the list to about 70%

Sunglasses and Battery Bank should be on their own lines. Please don't text wrap within the list.

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[What's Not Included]


Now just to set the expectations correctly guys, I wanna remind you that the entrance fee to the Byodo Temple and the cost of lunch is not included in the price of the tour. So please be sure and bring some cash or cards for that. 


So that covers most of the important information about the tour. 

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[Pickup Time and Location Notes]


One thing that is really important to know is that your pickup time and your pickup location need to be manually assigned by a tour coordinator.

If you purchased through a travel agency like trip advisor, then they are not able to transfer all of the necessary data over to do this automatically. So, to complete your reservation, we need to connect you with one of our tour coordinators. 

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Please use the background image on the right. Click on the image for large version, then right click to save. Please position Tanisha or reverse image so that no one is blocking each other.

Also, please add the following textual headings / supers with script timing according to the color coding:


Booking Confirmation

*Fill Out Form Below

*Connect With a Tour Coordinator

Please use the new timing format right above. This time please locate all on the top line caption header.

[Fill Out the Form below for Reserving a Confirmation Call]


Our coordinators will give you a confirmation call at a time that is most convenient for you.

So, please fill out the form below with your tour details and input a time in the calendar that works best for your confirmation call. Please also have the voucher number given to you by the travel agency to input in the form.

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Please use the background image on the right. Click on the image for large version, then right click to save. Please position Tanisha or reverse image so that no one is blocking each other.

Also, please add the following textual headings / supers with script timing according to the color coding:


Form Details

*Input Ticket Details

*Reserve time with Coordinator

Please use the new timing format right above. This time please locate all on the top line caption header.

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[Check Out Special Offers for Our Other Tours]


Okay, now once your form is submitted, Step Two is to take a look at the special offers that we have to share with you for our other awesome tours.

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For instance, Pearl Harbor is the number one visitor attraction in all of Hawaii by far, and we have both a half day and full day tour option that will be perfect for the level of history that you are ready for. 

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We also work closely with one of the best Hawaiian Luaus in the State, and we have Buy One Get One Free Specials running for Both Tours.

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I don't want you to miss out on those... So please take a moment to look at these special offers that are only available to our customers like you now. Again, these deals are only available to you because you’re already our customer.

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Please use the background images on the right. Click on the image for large version, then right click to save. Don't right click the thumbnail. Perhaps we should move Tanisha a little to the right to balance the spacing of the supers when they appear on screen.

Also, please add the following textual headings / supers with script timing according to the color coding:


Reveal as she is speaking:

A Special Offer For You

(Please add according to color coding above)


*USS Arizona, Pearl Harbor, & Honolulu

(This caption was missed on the original version)


*Top Rated Hawaiian Luau

(This caption was missed on the original version)


A Special Offer For You

(Please add according to color coding above)

Please use the new timing format right above. This time please locate all on the top line caption header.

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[Have the Confirmation Call - Get Fare Harbor tickets & Pickup Info]


And the third and final step is to have the confirmation call with one of our tour coordinators who will finalize your booking, tickets, and pickup information.

You will receive your Fare Harbor tickets to your phone and email with confirmation and your assigned pickup time and location.

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Now these agents are very knowledgeable about the circle island tour, and many other tours in Hawaii. So, be sure and ask them about the special offers that we have for your Pearl Harbor and Hawaiian Luau Tours.

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Please use the background image on the right. Click on the image for large version, then right click to save. Please position Tanisha or reverse image so that no one is blocking each other.

Also, please add the following textual headings / supers with script timing according to the color coding:


Have Confirmation Call


*Receive Tickets

*Pickup Information

*Q&A

Have Confirmation Call

Please use the new timing format right above.

[Wrap Up]


Alright folks, thank you So Much for your consideration of this explainer video for the Circle Island Tour. Please follow the steps below and complete your booking confirmation.

If you have any questions, you can always reach out to the team by calling, or using Live Chat, which should be on the bottom right of the website page. 


Mahalo Everyone. Again, my name is Konani, and I hope you make it a great day!

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Also, please add the following textual headings / supers with script timing according to the color coding:


Aloha & Mahalo Nui Loa

Please Complete Form Below

Please use the new timing format right above.